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Originally Posted by Lil' Soul
“...It hasn’t been the same since Santiago…” Ha.. No doubt baby.. nobody kicks your ass like I do. 
Beautiful writing.. We got to get you up on a few authors who write martial art style.. Let you check out how to describe battle sequences in exquisite detail. That’s about the only thing I noticed that would enhance that chapter.
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I can do that..martial art style writing..I was just lazy.