MAKING LOVE... My New Poem...

that I wrote a few weeks ago... not my best... hope you like it though. I'm SUPER hard on myself so I'm never satisfied with what I write.

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Making Love


My head rests upon your chest
Moving with your breath; up and down
Your heart flows a blessed rhythm
Letting your essence be shown
I trace my hand upon your cheek,
Upon your neck, upon your breasts
I feel your warmth grow unchecked
Blood roaring, raging, for us no rest
And lay me down inside you
Now two souls merge becoming
Voices heard above the thrall
Throbbing, pulsing, drumming

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Shawn "Loc Da'Borg" Jackson
http://www.shawndaborg.com

Black people have become somewhat racist within themselves to a certain degree; it pisses me off to hear from a black person "she's pretty to be a dark skinned girl". As if dark skinned girls aren't pretty. BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL IN EVERY WAY!!!!!! - tatiana23

SIMON

Good piece,Loc..

Locutus 2.0

Thanks Black...