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Darkness Falls
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Most of the board regulars from "back in the day" remember a vampire-themed story I did featuring members of the board. I never got to finish it because the computer I had back then crashed and I lost the work. So now, years later I want to make up for it. This is the new, revamped version of Dark Corner. (Are you happy Soul, now I'm posting it)

Below is the outline of the story for those not familiar with it. This is for you all to get to know the characters in the story and what their roles are and what it's about.

These's are the main characters by screenname and name.

Shardaye - Sha - The Neteru
Skip2MyLuu - Kenya - The Mother-Seer
LRaine - Leah - Best Friend of the Neteru
RamSOS - Ram - Guardian
Sanchez - Sanchez - Master Vampire
Lil_Soul - Chris - Second Level Vampire
KrystalMeredith1 - Krystal - Second Level Vampire
Locutus 2.0 - Shawn - Guardian
MrFlava - Drew - Guardian
Kai - Dauntae - Guardian
SkaN*gga - Jay - Guardian
IMAX - Chuck - Guardian

and more will be added as the story moves along.


Character Synopsis

The Neteru and her team of Guardian protectors are a non-biological family of unlikely heroes that have come together for a common cause-to thwart evil, specifically, vampiric evil. Each has lived their own private horror, which has razor-honed their special gifts and thrust them into this strange clan of vampire hunters.

The Neteru:

Sha is the vampire huntress. She, like her guardian brothers and sisters, possesses special gifts. Unlike them, she is Omnivoyant which means she possesses all six area of extrasensory perception plus a seventh that is only held by one of her rank as a Neteru.


The Guardians:

Kenya is the seer of the group. She possesses the gift of Second Sight. The resident healer and den mother of the group.

Ram is a Tactical. He feels the unseen. He is the father figure for the Guardian team.

Chuck has the gift of audio sensory. He can hear what the spirits whisper.

Dauntae is the nose of the group. Olfactory senses. He can smell trouble brewing, especially demonic trouble.

Drew possesses the gifts of olfactory and taste and is an expert tracker. He is also Dauntae’s right hand.

Shawn is a Tactical and Ram’s right hand man. The wizard of the group and weapons specialist.

Jay is a Tactical as well. He is the newest member of the Guardian team and a reluctant one.

Leah, though not a Guardian, is the Neteru’s rock. She’s the one that Sha will go to when she need to chill out from her “night job”. Leah keeps her sane.



The Vampires:

Chris is a vampire on edge, caught in the perilous unseen gap between both worlds. He is a master strategist. The way he plays with people is like a chess game....he studies them...studies their moves...and thinks over his own moves before delivering a deadly blow.

Sanchez is evil incarnate, a Master vampire who comes from a long line of predators. Descended from Dracula, beware of his seductive talents. His allure is beyond mortal. He is the deadly type...in your face deadly...he will not hesitate to suck the blood out of you and kill you. Yet he finds an almost childlike humor in baiting his prey before he destroys them. Yes, he will play with your head before he takes it off.

Krystal is the daughter of Kenya. She was turned by Sanchez in his pursuit of the Neteru. She now serves at Sanchez’s right hand and has a deep hatred for her mother and the Neteru.

Both Chris and Krystal are second level vampires. Second levels are some of the strongest vampires around. They are beholden only to the Master vampires that made them. It’s a cycle. Masters beget Second Levels, Second Levels beget Thirds…and as the levels diminish, so does power. Once you get beyond Third Levels, you can’t even bare fangs.

This story is about the never-ending struggle between good and evil. Love plays a major factor in it: The love of humanity, love of family, and loving the world enough to have a commitment to something greater than oneself, and of course this is about the love between one man and one woman. This Guardian team has been ordained by the Light to defend a world shadowed by darkness.



Prologue and Chapter 1 are up next.

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Old 04-08-2008   #111 (permalink)
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All that waiting.. hoping.. and still no new sex.. Fitting how you got me and my homie warring with eachother.. That’s about the only possible way the story could have any semblance of reality. Let us take on the world together.. as in real life.. and ya’lls asses would be histo-fvckin-reee..

I dig that “Give them a little taste of Heaven, for tomorrow we’re going to Hell” bit.. Nice.
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uh oh preparation for the coming battle oooooo goodie goodie lol Soul getting kinda sex driven aren't ya lol
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Just don't kill the black ppl off... lol

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Love It!!
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Great writing...a cool club scene with a certain dj would be cool!
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kinda wish she would've finished it was actually turning out to be a pretty good story
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Dunno, maybe she'll come back. Love to see the deaths of Sanchez and Double Promo.
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Dunno, maybe she'll come back. Love to see the deaths of Sanchez and Double Promo.
Doubt she's finishing this story mckoy she has been a busy woman as of late plotting to take over the world maybe.
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she had lost interest in the story... and in the board to a degree... so she said she wasnt going to finish this... or be on here really...
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