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Old 04-02-2008   #1
 
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Love Lost
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I wrote this b/c I was inspired by a story a dear friend of mine wrote. She wrote about these characters I began to care about and though the story was tragic, it had something in it that really hit home... something that really made me say "I know this"

The story was about love... love of family... love of friends... love of perfect strangers who are calling out for help and only you can help them. Its also about love and regret. We don't have forever and a day on this earth... so tell the person next to you, whether it be your friend, lover, brother or sister, your parents, cousins, children... "I LOVE YOU". That simple. That powerful. Don't lose another day or minute.

Love Lost



There was a time I loved you

When words couldn't do

But my heart feared something so,

It Feared the unknown with you

We started as friends and not lovers,

But it was Almost something more

But it all doesn't matter now

Now that the darkness closed the door



I feel empty now that you're gone

A hole in my chest so deep

You cared for me, loved me

You're a now a memory I'll forever keep

I locked your smile in my heart today

Placed your warmth in my hand

Kissed your gentleness with my dreams

And with you, in my heart, here we stand



It hurts so much to say these words

But say them I know I must

You gave me a love so true and pure

You gave me more than enough

I hope you know that I'm alright

I'm here letting God's light,

Shine thru me as I stand upright,

Good-bye

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Old 04-05-2008   #2 (permalink)
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Nice!!!
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thanks pumpkin! *kiss*
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I like it. Nice job!
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