05-05-2008
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Locutus 2.0
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(Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
The Night opens, the day is closed
Then my eyes find that vision
Hidden in clouds of white and gold
That vision of you
Entrigue, I TAG YOU
Don't forget to tag someone after your turn!!
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Black people have become somewhat racist within themselves to a certain degree; it pisses me off to hear from a black person "she's pretty to be a dark skinned girl". As if dark skinned girls aren't pretty. BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL IN EVERY WAY!!!!!! - tatiana23
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05-08-2008
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
New tag. Loc Dogg.. it’s come full circle homie.. finish this one off..
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05-08-2008
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
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Last edited by Locutus 2.0; 05-08-2008 at 02:46 PM..
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Shawn "Loc Da'Borg" Jackson
http://www.shawndaborg.com
Black people have become somewhat racist within themselves to a certain degree; it pisses me off to hear from a black person "she's pretty to be a dark skinned girl". As if dark skinned girls aren't pretty. BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL IN EVERY WAY!!!!!! - tatiana23
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05-08-2008
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#13 (permalink)
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
lol@ yall breakin rules up in here... Loc already went he wasnt supposed to go AGAIN...
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05-08-2008
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
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Originally Posted by no1uvintrest
lol@ yall breakin rules up in here... Loc already went he wasnt supposed to go AGAIN...
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My apologies baby.. When I saw no tagbacks in the rules.. I did not interpret that to mean you could not tag someone who had already contributed. I took it to mean that you could not tag the person who tagged you.
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05-08-2008
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
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Shawn "Loc Da'Borg" Jackson
http://www.shawndaborg.com
Black people have become somewhat racist within themselves to a certain degree; it pisses me off to hear from a black person "she's pretty to be a dark skinned girl". As if dark skinned girls aren't pretty. BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL IN EVERY WAY!!!!!! - tatiana23
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05-10-2008
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
so... is someone gonna finish this poem or what?? Soul you still need to tag someone to finish this since Shawn decided to edit in order to adhere to rules...
(my suggestion would be the newbie thats been on a posting frenzie here in our poetry corner)
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05-10-2008
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
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Originally Posted by no1uvintrest
(my suggestion would be the newbie thats been on a posting frenzie here in our poetry corner)
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That would be waaaayyy too easy.. I can’t believe how chicken some of these board women are.. Ha.. And ya’lls ass say MEN can’t step out of our comfort zone to try new sh!t.. Psshh.. I’ll find somebody. Give me time.
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
It’s so obvious.. I can’t believe I didn’t see it before.. Speak2Free!!! You’ve been tagged! Finish this one up for us baby.
Anyone who knows how to get hold of her outside of the board, let her know she’s up. She’s a busy woman now and I don’t want her to miss the window. 
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05-10-2008
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
oooooooo goood Pick Soul...
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05-12-2008
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Re: (Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams
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Originally Posted by Lil' Soul
It’s so obvious.. I can’t believe I didn’t see it before.. Speak2Free!!! You’ve been tagged! Finish this one up for us baby.
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Sorry, folks, like the Big Cat said, I've been busy...I'm at work so this has to be a quickie...I hope I'm doing this right, so here goes....
The Night opens, the day is closed
Then my eyes find that vision
Hidden in clouds of white and gold
That vision of you
But this vision is tainted
As was the love we once shared
You left my heart broken,
How can it be repaired?
though i no longer desire an "us"
i think im due the time wasted
since tainted love and broken trust
is now my new vision
But my vision is no longer tainted,
Thank God I got LASIK
This means we are through
And you can eat a fat d i c k
Through the myriad of emotions, this dream has taken flight..
Can I look on you in splendor, as a sunrise that follows night..
Or must the shadow of the past, rein supreme within the fight..
To forgive or condemn, how to choose what’s really right.
[color=black] My vision wonders, back when you held me tight,
kissed my lips, and melt my insides
Forgiveness is an option, but what price must I pay,
missing your tongue, longing for your foreplay
Now I'm all confused, not of how good you loved me,
but, how bad you treated me...
Last edited by Speak2free; 05-13-2008 at 08:47 PM..
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