(Poetry Tag) Night into Dreams

The Night opens, the day is closed
Then my eyes find that vision
Hidden in clouds of white and gold
That vision of you


Entrigue, I TAG YOU

Don't forget to tag someone after your turn!!

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no1uvintrest

^^good start Shawn...
cant wait to see where Etrigue takes it..

Locutus 2.0

Ok... SInce Entrigue isn't gonna be online for a lil while... I Tag Shardaye!!

shardaye

The Night opens, the day is closed
Then my eyes find that vision
Hidden in clouds of white and gold
That vision of you

But this vision is tainted
As was the love we once shared
You left my heart broken,
How can it be repaired?


Jess, Tag, You're It....

no1uvintrest

The Night opens, the day is closed
Then my eyes find that vision
Hidden in clouds of white and gold
That vision of you

But this vision is tainted
As was the love we once shared
You left my heart broken,
How can it be repaired?

though i no longer desire an "us"
i think im due the time wasted
since tainted love and broken trust
is now my new vision

hrmm... MAAARFIE BABY... im taggin you boo

Maaarf

The Night opens, the day is closed
Then my eyes find that vision
Hidden in clouds of white and gold
That vision of you

But this vision is tainted
As was the love we once shared
You left my heart broken,
How can it be repaired?

though i no longer desire an "us"
i think im due the time wasted
since tainted love and broken trust
is now my new vision

But my vision is no longer tainted,
Thank God I got LASIK
This means we are through
And you can eat a fat d i c k

Lil' Soul you're it..

Lil' Soul

The Night opens, the day is closed
Then my eyes find that vision
Hidden in clouds of white and gold
That vision of you

But this vision is tainted
As was the love we once shared
You left my heart broken,
How can it be repaired?

though i no longer desire an "us"
i think im due the time wasted
since tainted love and broken trust
is now my new vision

But my vision is no longer tainted,
Thank God I got LASIK
This means we are through
And you can eat a fat d i c k

Through the myriad of emotions, this dream has taken flight..
Can I look on you in splendor, as a sunrise that follows night..
Or must the shadow of the past, rein supreme within the fight..
To forgive or condemn, how to choose what’s really right.

India.. You're up lover.

no1uvintrest

lol^ this is very interestin

soul, i like your word play... didnt know you got down like that playa...

Lil' Soul

This is Lil’ Soul you’re talking about baby girl.. Always a deeper level..

no1uvintrest

indeed... indeed
so i see