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Old 05-17-2008   #1
 
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(poetry tag) Blue Shoe
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walkin down the street i stepped in some goo..
needless to say this made me upset...
it felt icky and nasty on the bottom of my shoe..
but upon further inspection i made a discovery...



MAAARFIE come and add to this boo..(lol)
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Re: (poetry tag) Blue Shoe

It wasn't poo like I first suspected
Still, that s h i t smell could not go undetected
I put my finger in it, not worrying 'bout getting infected
Put the finger to my nose, and this is how I reacted

Shardaye you're it

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Dream beautiful and unusual
Wake up like every day new to you
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I scrunched up my nose,
And I screwed up my face.
Now I gotta wipe my finger,
So I looked around for a place...





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Re: (poetry tag) Blue Shoe

I saw you there serenely..
Enjoying a peaceful scene..
I grabbed your hair meanly..
And scrubbed my finger clean..



It's your turn Loc Dogg..
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Re: (poetry tag) Blue Shoe

You looked at me profoundly
I didn't know what to say
And when you said "Do you like me?"
I felt bad about the dog doo

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Re: (poetry tag) Blue Shoe

But to my surprise you didn't like me
b/c you got up and knocked me to my feet
Now I lay, right where I had steped
in that pile of goo, mess

I don't know who to tag next...
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Re: (poetry tag) Blue Shoe

you dont have to tag anyone else miss Speak... we got 6! g'job everybody!! llol

very...different
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Re: (poetry tag) Blue Shoe

so maybe Miss Speak should start one... it doesnt seem fair that she always ends..

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Ohhh, no, in this thread, I prefere to be last...
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Re: (poetry tag) Blue Shoe

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Ohhh, no, in this thread, I prefere to be last...
No.. Not this thread baby.. Start a new thread with (Poetry Tag) followed by the title of your poem as the name of the thread.. Then drop the first four bars and tag somebody. You can look at the title of this thread and Loc's previous to see the format it should follow..
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