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(Poetry Tag) Evolutional Journey
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Evolutional Journey

Emotion shows, as life flows, and imagination grows..
My soul unbound, in a profound, launch from the ground..
Discovering transcendence, by providence, and not coincidence..
I move with ease, through an energetic breeze, holding life’s keys..


Stylze baby.. I tag YOU..
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Old 06-01-2008   #11 (permalink)
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Emotion shows, as life flows, and imagination grows..
My soul unbound, in a profound, launch from the ground..

Discovering transcendence, by providence, and not coincidence..
I move with ease, through an energetic breeze, holding life’s keys..


but emotion's change, with life's range, and imagination becomes strange...
and as i progress, these keys that i possess, begin to cause me stress...
for life-lessons i gain, while still learning the game, cause the rules always change...
and that aim for bliss, feels like a swing and a miss, becoming a wish...


Unrealized aspirations and dreams, life is not what it seems, this is what I mean…
A tortured soul, hidden within the folds, not knowing what the future holds…
Hard learned life lessons, plenty of stressin’, not enough blessin’…
A search for solid ground, and love to surround, hope was needed, but it was pain I found…


Unfulfilled dreams, lying screams, making me feel like I'm back in my teens
These keys turn locks, locking Glocks, and letting loose time's clocks
Time ain't my friend, as I cross the bend, my emotions of change never end
And in these shoes, if you can see my true blue, the life I've yet to sewn and hew


My soul torn, and body worn, from the blessings constantly born
This roller coaster of fees, from holding life's keys, leave me longing to flee
I chose to dig deep, as loving conditional black sheep, can become bittersweet
Revealed are the costumes, and changes consume, as I finally allow happiness to bloom
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Maaarf you are tagged.
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Emotion shows, as life flows, and imagination grows..
My soul unbound, in a profound, launch from the ground..

Discovering transcendence, by providence, and not coincidence..
I move with ease, through an energetic breeze, holding life’s keys..


but emotion's change, with life's range, and imagination becomes strange...
and as i progress, these keys that i possess, begin to cause me stress...
for life-lessons i gain, while still learning the game, cause the rules always change...
and that aim for bliss, feels like a swing and a miss, becoming a wish...


Unrealized aspirations and dreams, life is not what it seems, this is what I mean…
A tortured soul, hidden within the folds, not knowing what the future holds…
Hard learned life lessons, plenty of stressin’, not enough blessin’…
A search for solid ground, and love to surround, hope was needed, but it was pain I found…


Unfulfilled dreams, lying screams, making me feel like I'm back in my teens
These keys turn locks, locking Glocks, and letting loose time's clocks
Time ain't my friend, as I cross the bend, my emotions of change never end
And in these shoes, if you can see my true blue, the life I've yet to sewn and hew


My soul torn, and body worn, from the blessings constantly born
This roller coaster of fees, from holding life's keys, leave me longing to flee
I chose to dig deep, as loving conditional black sheep, can become bittersweet
Revealed are the costumes, and changes consume, as I finally allow happiness to bloom


My mind is free, move without boundaries, nothing I can't achieve...
As doubt reached extinction, with my extensions, connect between dimensions...
With myself I fought, but everything I sought, started from a thought...
So I move with ease, through an energetic breeze, holding life’s keys...

If I part, my art will live through you
Dream beautiful and unusual
Wake up like every day new to you
Stay true to you

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Those last two verses are great.. And Maaarf.. homie.. you are amazing bro.. You would not suspect English was not your native tongue from your skill in poetry.
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WOO! now THAT is what poetry tag is about... DANG im glad to be a part of this one... hopefully this will attract more players
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Those last two verses are great.. And Maaarf.. homie.. you are amazing bro.. You would not suspect English was not your native tongue from your skill in poetry.
Thanks man, oh and if you do find errors in it, those are put there on purpose to emphasize my rebellious poetic style

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^I DONT MIND YOU BEIN A REBEL BEW...
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Dream beautiful and unusual
Wake up like every day new to you
Stay true to you

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Re: (Poetry Tag) Evolutional Journey

Maaarf, you should start a new Tag session
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tragic and i didn't get crack at it
I am not mysterious...you just asking the wrong questions.



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