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(Poetry Tag) Evolutional Journey
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Evolutional Journey

Emotion shows, as life flows, and imagination grows..
My soul unbound, in a profound, launch from the ground..
Discovering transcendence, by providence, and not coincidence..
I move with ease, through an energetic breeze, holding life’s keys..


Stylze baby.. I tag YOU..
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Emotion shows, as life flows, and imagination grows..
My soul unbound, in a profound, launch from the ground..
Discovering transcendence, by providence, and not coincidence..
I move with ease, through an energetic breeze, holding life’s keys..


but emotion's change, with life's range, and imagination becomes strange...
and as i progress, these keys that i possess, begin to cause me stress...
for life-lessons i gain, while still learning the game, cause the rules always change...
and that aim for bliss, feels like a swing and a miss, becoming a wish...




hmm... i think im gonna tag Daye... come on down Miss Lady!

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^^ this was NOT EASY BTW...lol Soul over here CHALLENGIN ppl and ish...
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^^Most impressive.. I dig that verse.. We might have to hit up the ATL to force Shar back to the board for an encore performance though.. Talk to her baby, and see if you can get her to contribute..
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yea i'll see what i can do Soul
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Emotion shows, as life flows, and imagination grows..
My soul unbound, in a profound, launch from the ground..

Discovering transcendence, by providence, and not coincidence..
I move with ease, through an energetic breeze, holding life’s keys..


but emotion's change, with life's range, and imagination becomes strange...
and as i progress, these keys that i possess, begin to cause me stress...
for life-lessons i gain, while still learning the game, cause the rules always change...
and that aim for bliss, feels like a swing and a miss, becoming a wish...


Unrealized aspirations and dreams, life is not what it seems, this is what I mean…
A tortured soul, hidden within the folds, not knowing what the future holds…
Hard learned life lessons, plenty of stressin’, not enough blessin’…
A search for solid ground, and love to surround, hope was needed, but it was pain I found…





Shawn, you're next.
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^^That’s a tight verse.. This is an example of what poetry should be about.. Ha.. Well, not so much the pain and suffering.. but rather.. deep, complicated, and very creative expression. Can't wait to see the finished product..
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word... ^
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Emotion shows, as life flows, and imagination grows..
My soul unbound, in a profound, launch from the ground..

Discovering transcendence, by providence, and not coincidence..
I move with ease, through an energetic breeze, holding life’s keys..


but emotion's change, with life's range, and imagination becomes strange...
and as i progress, these keys that i possess, begin to cause me stress...
for life-lessons i gain, while still learning the game, cause the rules always change...
and that aim for bliss, feels like a swing and a miss, becoming a wish...


Unrealized aspirations and dreams, life is not what it seems, this is what I mean…
A tortured soul, hidden within the folds, not knowing what the future holds…
Hard learned life lessons, plenty of stressin’, not enough blessin’…
A search for solid ground, and love to surround, hope was needed, but it was pain I found…


Unfulfilled dreams, lying screams, making me feel like I'm back in my teens
These keys turn locks, locking Glocks, and letting loose time's clocks
Time ain't my friend, as I cross the bend, my emotions of change never end
And in these shoes, if you can see my true blue, the life I've yet to sewn and hew


India, you are Tagged

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^^ Really nice.. Ya’ll are some creative individuals.. Sounds like ya’ll are depressed as FVCK.. But creative none the less.
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