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Old 03-03-2005   #1
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yo wats good lets a lil writting thing going on (I KNO THIS IS THE WRONG FORM BUT SO WAT)
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Old 03-08-2005   #2 (permalink)
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I try to, lil abstract tho

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How can I live, when the bonds are so stiff,
I can't take in any air, my soul can't even lift,
soar down, I'm tumblin, snowflake thats crumblin,
out a control, aware and now been humblin,
my short comings, are just too much too hold
I feel so cold, as thoughts are bundled and sold,
to a market of snakes, that swallow whole the lakes
streams and rivers, they take and eat their cake,
no sacrifice, so I'm frozen in until ceasefire,
only few that know, that these needs are dire,
higher it gets the flames and erosion,
socially an explosion of superficial corrosion,
and they have to guts to say "look out for yourself"
to live a whole day, without thinking of anyone else
Thats why I need to break these chains, feel reigns,
to power, for my own, at least for the final Hour Home

Hook:
Helpless ,My minds left broken,
Hopeless , and Times still frozen,
Helpless ,My minds left broken,
Hopeless , theres no doors left open,

Set Free, no matter the cost,
Help me, I seem to be lost
Set Free, no matter the cost,
Help me, All thats left is Frost

Now in my night dreams, there is this little girl,
and in her tiny hand, she holds a small pearl,
from this sphere, she says it lights the universe,
"so its a star" I say, trying hard to converse,
she shakes her head and then closes her fist,
I see raising dead, and her body turn to mist,
I start to run, but my feet can't move,
**** I'm done! always bound to loose,
suddenly, I'm in front of my house, you know,
the place I grew up, lurking lone in the shadows,
are the ghosts of my self hate, I try to concentrate
think of that free space where I'm passed the gates
to live with my reflection again, and not smash it in,
cuz those past shards formed daggers in my skin,
So I'll remember that girl, associate her with fear,
for now til she has more to say next time she appears

Hook:
Helpless ,My minds left broken,
Hopeless , and Times still frozen,
Helpless ,My minds left broken,
Hopeless , theres no doors left open,

Set Free, no matter the cost,
Help me, I seem to be lost
Set Free, no matter the cost,
Help me, All thats left is Frost

you know what I took in from all those nightmares,
I saw strength from within, and it is mighty scarce
it all seems so negative, what else could I do?
Stop, target, shoot, miss, weep, sigh, subdue
I'm a Beta mind thats trapped inside an Alphas body,
In nature I find the woman who smiled as she shot me,
that smirk stays constant, as an image in my head
imbeded to this day, I stay cautious, and I dread
change, you know the feeling, it is like I can't talk
to women, plus there is so many of em covern this rock
I stare out in a window of spread open legs
only to have it closed, and even if I beg
I continue my work until permafrost is lifted
only hope the social balance can then be shifted
punch in my hours develop unhealthy contempt
my sanitity may turn sour, and life I may attempt
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Disturbed 2002

I did this on a mixtape so its not a complete song, just me flowin on the Clipse beat Grindin


Verse 1:
I observe disturbed at this world that we live in
a place where we'd rather take than focus on givin
we act like helpin others is hurtin us
make more enemies than friends left with no one to trust
in families turn their backs over dollar signs they don't know how to act
money makes the world go 'round and it makes war too
people hungry in the streets what do we do
walk past ignore some laugh like its funny
singing I love the lord but really its that money
cars, jewelry and clothes it all goes out of style
rather watch television than watch your own child

Verse 2:
I'm disturbed when I see babies dying
everyday watch the news I start crying
can't take the pain of knowing kids are starving
roaming through the streets I know there life is hard and
it wasn't their choice born addictedto crack left alone with no voice
mommy went to get a hit and never came home
not a second thought of how she left her seeds alone
so what should they do sell drugs, sex or rob me and you
thoughts of their future makes me wonder
can they rise above or will life take them under

Verse 3:
Its disturbing every minute murders and rapes
in this world gotta be cautious every step that we take
neglect rejection makes my tear ducts bleed
'cause the parents seem to love themselves more than their seeds
too black to get a job too light to be black too dark to be a beauty
too skinny or fat
self hatred leads to self mutilaton
plastic surgery, bleach and perms reject our own races
they say theres no beauty in nappy hair and black faces
we're a nation of clones look around something to think about
its insane to see we all go the same route
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Re: Hot ish!!!

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I'm feeling the vibe. It just takes getting it to the right person & BLAOW!!!
New tax bracket. Keep pushing forward. Check out CarlBEntertainment.com & see what I'm talking about. Click on the cd cover when you do to hear.
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BE GONE!!! FOKK FACE!!!


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Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
The Truth shall free me.

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Re: Hot ish!!!

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Originally Posted by S.I.
I'm feeling the vibe. It just takes getting it to the right person & BLAOW!!!
New tax bracket. Keep pushing forward. Check out CarlBEntertainment.com & see what I'm talking about. Click on the cd cover when you do to hear.
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Please stop spaming!!!


Hey smoothkid, kno, and Mykle.....can you all please post there in the freestyle thread? Thank you and I enjoyed all of your pieces!
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Hey fam...can you guys post your rapp in the 'Freestyle Thread' please? I'd appreciate it...thanks....and keep up the battles!!
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