Poetry and Writing

Poetic Captivity

Do my words hold you captive
Leg with leg, arm with arm
Are you doomed to face submission
Without any evidence of harm

Do my lines seclude your thoughts
In a most unspeakeable essence
Incapacitating your mind
Yet declining fear's presence

The sting of confinement
The dread of apprehension
Nevertheless, it is poetic captivity
In case I forgot to mention

Hi, Melyssa! My name is Derrick Chandler. I like writing poetry, also. Maybe someday,
You can give me a poem that will capture my mind. If I dont sound too exciting or interesting, please forgive me. It's just that I'm pretty sure that you get alot of crazed
fans every day, telling you what they would like to do to you if you let them. But I'd
rather please your intellect and your emotions before anything else. If your not too busy, please respond to me at DeonVocals@Yahoo.com. (Deon is my nickname, and I can sing also. That's why I chose Vocals)